WRITING - UNIT 8




Dear Editor

I am writing to express my concern about an advert which appeared on page 19 of you magazine last week. I think this announcement is not quite true.
The advert said the hair cream and shampoo brand SEDAL is ideal for all hair types and a woman with curly hair to perfection appeared in the ad and unfortunately this is not true because the cream does not make that kind of curls, the curls of the girl in the advert curls are made of curlers and a professional stylist.
Furthermore, the advert uses false information to sell the products because the cream for hair is bad because it leaves your hair very greasy and tends to dandruff.
The SEDAL Pruducts not offer much efficiency in service, I would not recommend it especially for women of greasy hair.
I like reading your journal ads recommended but this time I would not recommend these products and are not suitable for all hair types, in spite that the advert says otherwise.

Best Regards

Maryori Perez
(This opinion was issued only for teaching purposes.)